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[.Cyong]

A newer style kinda =D Constructive Criticism please?


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[Volcano]

Not much critical stuff here, its just too dark, i dont like darkness. else nice, render and background. Why do everyone use that troll? i actually hate it?

[Shinyshoes]

Not much critical stuff here, its just too dark, i dont like darkness. else nice, render and background. Why do everyone use that troll? i actually hate it?

It's not a troll first off. Secondly, The sig is just way to simple in my opinion, I mean simplicity can be a style, but there has to be more work done in my opinion. It's an oddworld character from a "semi-popular" xbox port. It was sort of fun


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Render isn't blending in at all. Background colors are nice, but you might want to do more, add lighting and depth ect. dodge tool and burn tool. oh and volcano, you need to practice that more in your current sig too, jack black is awesome, but is that a stroke on em? And you need to do more with that :P

[CarlosJ]

i think compared to your last sig you've taken the criticism on board and have worked with adding light, and motion to the back of the sig to help with depth. however you need to relate this into the render as well. currently the render is all light(apart from some slight shadows on the left), the left side of it should be darker and contain shadows (can be done with the burn tool) to complement the light source on the right. nothing major but the edges of the render aren't dark enough so stand out against the dark background. so at the moment your render looks really flat on the sig and doesn't help with the depth

i think your font choice fits well but the more i look at the placement it seems wrong because its part of the focal point, try repositioning it elsewhere.
i would go with the scan lines version but try to hide them more on the right side of the render so that it doesn't help cloud the brightness and in turn accentuates the shadows on the left.

[BrightChild]

try to get the lighting better worked out. You have a bright render in a dark place. darken up the render a bit with the burn tool, or however you like to darken things. mess with the lighting.