[Show-Off][Rate] A new WP i made.

[Lord-kapser]

Hello out there.
I just tried to make a new WP and i want some constructive critism to help me improve my work. please rate it on 1/10 scale and put a comment. it all is verry appreciated :P


i used RyudoP's awesome tutorial to make the text
Lord-kapser

[CarlosJ]

tbh i cant give any improvements to it as number one im not sure on how to improve 'c4ds' but number 2 i think it looks really nice. the only problem i have is the text, it just seems a bit plain. it looks nice and i like the 3d effect on it going through the back but i think it just needs some effects to it, other than that awesome work

[Krip]

Needs a lot of improvement, the text looks good but it's floating randomly in the air. Also it's just too plain and it doesn't flow well with each other.
You have lots of room for improvement, keep trying! This wallpaper is just not completed.

[Shinyshoes]

Yeah, I'm going with the above posters, it seems like there could have been alot more done. It's basically two matching Cd4's and 3d text on black background. Try giving it more detail, or some shapes if you are going for a simple look

-Shiny

[Piersd]

they dont really look like c4ds, they look more like these "winter breeze" brushes by some axeraider guy. Needs a more interesting background, just plain black isn't that interesting. text and the brushing/c4d don't fit too well together imo. Maybe give it a focal point, like move the brushing/c4d around the text and put a gradient in the background. Just trying to give some ideas/help.

[Lord-kapser]

Hehe thanks for all the feedback it is alot appriciated and piersd u are right it is brushes but not only winterchill ;D

Lord-kapser