Originally Posted by
Breakdown88
To sum up worldslayers thing, both signatures lack flow, depth, color tone, and basically color flow.
Thing's are jumping around too much, one second you have the render, than brushing, some scratch, more brushing and basically very hard to see it from one stand point.
Also guys, text is part of the signature, and while it may seem to be an enemy in taking away attention on the focal. The text it self has to stand out, it's you're task to make it so it doesn't out stand you're intended focal.