Hey guys, i wrote a story!

[Memphiz]

sup guys, i wrote a story!
its about a young adventurer, just read it please!





i start as a pawn,
i travel around my city as i complete senseless tasks.
i return to my leaders and provide them with a sucessful battle report.
i get thrown pennies and a bit of knowledge.
an insult indeed, but i supress my anger.
i know one day il become a veteran journeyman.
so i leave my city, adventuring for a new world.
along the path, i come across a small town.
there are people who need my assistance.
i help them slay beasts around town and collect necessaties.
as i complete my errands, i find i am learning more about my surroundings.
i gain knowledge of who i am
what i am supposed to be.
i leave this city, yet again in search of a greater challenge.
in the distance, i see a massive land mass.
i question myself as to what it could be until i finally come to it
it is one gigantic city.
i venture inside, and i see a abundance of travellers
all races, both male and female are going back and forth
buying, selling is going on everywhere
i can hear a auctioneer om the distance selling goods.
along my run around this city, i come across a wise leader.
i sit down and listen to this elder tell his storys of a million battles.
intrigued, i ask him to teach me his ways.
he said, as i become stronger, he will teach me more of his Journeys.
knowing a purpose, i travel back into the wild
i run into friends and enemies along the way
helping me overcome obstacles aswell as being one in my way
as the journey continues, i find equipment that helps protect myself
as well as daggers and swords that destroy my foes.
as i grow with age, so does my skill
i find that enemies that gave me trouble in the past now seem effortless to defeat.
after many moons out in the battlegrounds, i return to my master once again.
he speaks of a greater evil over the horizon.
a opposite faction has the true intent to eliminate our race!
astonished, i pull out a stone and start to sharpen my blade as this retired hero carrys on
only to hear i am not yet experienced enough.
these enemies are well trained
over 100 years of fighting and traveling have made these foes formidable.
depressed, i return to the field, to train and train
with the sole purpose to fight for my tribe!
30 years had passed. everywhere over this continent has proven too weak
too brittle and will crumble under my powerful strike.
with such a long journey finally completed, i return one last time
to speak to my master.
i tell him i am ready, i am prepared to fight for my cause!
for the first time in my life, i see the elder smile.
he tells me to procede to see the emisarry.
i enter through a portal, and i am magically transported to a new world!
with other fighters from different worlds, i am brought to new soil
a new place for enemies to bleed from my strikes.
the gates lift, and i rush onto the field, ready for action!
i look across the field, and i see nothing but dark haze.
but through the smoke i see a new enemy, such of i have never seen before!
i have only slain beasts and vermin of such, never another human
they have traits of the same as us
i see large beasts alongside a robed man, along with a tiger alongside a confident huntress
i snap back into action, follow my men, and charge into battle!
FOR THE HORDE!

:wave:

[Snitch]

I think that
you should
restructure your
story.

Snitch

[Dimmy353]

why is the point?