revised version how does this lua look

[towaly]

Newley edited still my first lua how does it look

function The_Lich_King_OnEnterCombat(pUnit, Event)
pUnit:SendChatMessage(14, 7, "Who dares oppose The Lich King!") pUnit:RegisterEvent("The_Lich_King_HeartStrike", 3000, 0)
PUnit:RegisterEvent("The_Lich_king_MoonFire", 2250,0)
end

Function The_Lich_King_HeartStrike(pUnit, Event)
pUnit:FullCastSpell(55262, pUnit:GetRandomPlayer(0))
end

Function The_Lich_King_MoonFire(pUnit, Event)
PUnit:FullCastSpell(48463, pUnit:GetRandomPlayer(0))
End

function The_Lich_King_Death(pUnit, Event) pUnit:RemoveEvents() pUnit:SendChatMessage(14, 0, "Someone must sit upon the throne.")
end

RegisterUnitEvent(99909, 1, "The_Lich_King_OnEnterCombat") RegisterUnitEvent(99909, 4, "The_Lich_King_Death")

[marcelo_20xx]

You dont need to start a new thread for every script you made, just update your previous post.

[stoneharry]

function The_Lich_King_OnEnterCombat(pUnit, Event) 
pUnit:SendChatMessage(14, 7, "Who dares oppose The Lich King!") -- new line for event, also are you sure you want to use language 7? That's not something everyone can read...
pUnit:RegisterEvent("The_Lich_King_HeartStrike", 3000, 0)
PUnit:RegisterEvent("The_Lich_king_MoonFire", 2250,0)
end 

Function The_Lich_King_HeartStrike(pUnit, Event) -- This should be done for the other function as well, it's to stop it returning an error if it doesn't find a player for some reason (which happens a lot)
local plr = pUnit:GetRandomPlayer(0) -- plr is a random player
if plr ~= nil then -- if our player is a person and not nothing 
pUnit:FullCastSpell(55262, plr) -- cast it on the player
end -- end the iff
end

Function The_Lich_King_MoonFire(pUnit, Event) -- same as above
PUnit:FullCastSpell(48463, pUnit:GetRandomPlayer(0))
end -- end is not a capital E, I changed it to e

function The_Lich_King_Death(pUnit, Event) 
pUnit:RemoveEvents() 
pUnit:SendChatMessage(14, 0, "Someone must sit upon the throne.") 
end 

RegisterUnitEvent(99909, 1, "The_Lich_King_OnEnterCombat") 
RegisterUnitEvent(99909, 4, "The_Lich_King_Death")

Fixed errors and commented.