[Showoff] Azeroth Wars - Thalador's Revenge Trailer

[Jackie Moon]

At long last! This trailer is long it basically just shows you about his past life and how he got too where he is. The actual project is about his revenge on the horde and the alliance as the next greatest threat to hit Azeroth's surface!

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Credits to BlakeRSH for the Logo!

[Dragonshadow]

Sorry, the story could be good with a little work (I don't know if you were trying to go with blizzard's story or not, because if you were then you are way off-base), but the video sucked. The voice acting was horrible, and the effects were sub-par at best (the orc being punted out of the window was probably the best effect).

Also (side-note), you don't have any credits to the music you're using (Gladiator iirc), so there's a good chance your video will be disabled (Unknown how Dreamworks and Universal treat their audio works)

[Jackie Moon]

Sorry, the story could be good with a little work (I don't know if you were trying to go with blizzard's story or not, because if you were then you are way off-base), but the video sucked. The voice acting was horrible, and the effects were sub-par at best (the orc being punted out of the window was probably the best effect).

Also (side-note), you don't have any credits to the music you're using (Gladiator iirc), so there's a good chance your video will be disabled (Unknown how Dreamworks and Universal treat their audio works)

True, I should of added credits. Note that all the voices are done by me. Also the story-line was supposed to be similar too Blizzard's but not the same and since you're good at this, please share some constructive tips on how I should improve my videos effects. That would be much appreciated.

[AfterMidnight]

Please don't open this if you're not set for some crude cc; I'd hate to discourage you
Best of luck either way.
[spoiler]1 minute in
Add dissapating flame sound to effect
Voice staring? o_o
Use wow machinima tool for smooth camera motion
Play with volume (footsteps sound point blank)
Shadow is too sharp and doesnt go with lightsource
Dwarf blood elf.. lol
Inappropriate presentation of logo

2 minutes in
Bad scene transfer
Use music appropriate to location as in WoW (goldshire inn in silvermoon??)
"GUGH GUGH GUGH, UHHH" - Lmao, again and specificly in regard to voices; work with volume levels
Also, make sure the sound reflects the characters actions
Articulate!
Anti aliasing alert!
Record longer animations; loop looks butched

3 minutes in
Use the same style in the entire movie (bolding out chars)
If you stop doing shadows, remove them from all scenes >.< same goes for changes
People that converse face eachother, not the camera
Blend effects, use camera motion to further emphasize the explosion (rubble)
Static portals a bit lazy dont you think? :P

4 minutes in:
(lmao loading screen)
We've all learned to love orcs as a ruthless race that cares only about honor - make sure the lines reflect that :S
Keep an eye out on scaling
Char went from sitting to standing in different direction in a blink of an eye O.o[/spoiler]