[Rate] New Signature

[EliteZodiaC]

I just started making signatures. What do you think? Give me some critic. What can i do better?

[Cheesy]

It looks pretty decent to me, but the text could get better... And, remember, add some kind of border. It will make the picture loads better, good job otherwise...

[CarlosJ]

if you have just started then i would say awesome work, to do better i would say try not to make the text so obvious (text can sometimes ruin a sig or help it to look better)
i like the techy background, not sure how much you did yourself as i cant really tell but looks nice nontherless.
i would say to work on your blending of the render. the brushy abstract thing you did on the left of the render jsut looks out of place (maybe betteron the right) and the design of it kind of stop to suddenly, it should fade a bit more into the sig imo.
the lighting use is preety good (not sure if its part of the stock) and helps to add depth but not very well, add some c4d or something as it looks flat behind the render. also maybe a white border or something just to finish of the sig
hope helps a bit

but very good for a first

[Vatralaus]

It is cool good work 9.5/10....

[EliteZodiaC]

better or worse ?

[CarlosJ]

better, however the render is covering some of the border at the top so kinda looks a bit weird there, but i prefer the text and the sig with the border