[Rate/Critique] Tried something different

[Piersd]

Hey hey, it's Piersd the mean grean fighting mahine. I felt like trying something different... this is kind of a sorta vector attempt, i quite like the sky, but the thing at the bottom (meant to be ground or something) could be done a bit better.

[Puff]

I think you realise you could of done better And your right. The sky is really nice, simple, minimalistic and subtle. But i really don't like that ground vector. It looks too much like a beveled object leading to tackyness.

Keep at it though. Vectors are brilliant!

- Puff

[Bizzie]

I agree, not too fond of the text, and the ground could use a bit of work.

Perhaps to touch it up a bit, add a blade or two of grass on the ground.

[Piersd]

i've tried vectors before, but most of them have failed badly lol . But i should change the ground around, it does look fair ugly lol

[aflacattack]

i like the text and the sky, but the ground just doesnt seem look right, but it still looks good

[Piersd]

i tried again, i have two different copies, i'm not really sure which one looks better, so tell me what you think



also, if anyone has any tips on how to make the ground look any better, please do tell