Rate another of my work

[Entr0py]

how you like it? rate

[.exodus]

Sig lacks depth and clarity. The Render is good quality, but not blended well. Text is pretty good. Just work on your comp, you've got a good start.

I don't really like giving out ratings....

[Entr0py]

mmm, look closly at background, water

[.exodus]

mmm, look closly at background, water

I stand by my statement.

[Entr0py]

yea probobly just in case any1 cant see it, should have made the "rain" more seethru...?

[Spurven]

Bio shock ftw. Quite nice sig i rate it 7/10

[Entr0py]

woot!
bioshock is amazin
only thing i rly hate about it is that there is to much empty space.
couldnt find a way to fill it up...

[.exodus]

yea probobly just in case any1 cant see it, should have made the "rain" more seethru...?

Ya lowering opacity can help. Try this:

With the "rain layer" active, CTRL+CLICK on the [image of in the layers palet] the "bio shock/render" layer. Go to Select>(Modify>)Feather @ about 10px. (Depending on what version of Photoshop you have, feather may be in a sub menu or it may not be).

Try it out. If you hate it, well I tried.

Good luck!

[Minimized]

The rain just isn't realistic... And you should have higher contrast on the render.

[Entr0py]

i kno the rain isnt that great either i couldnt find a good rain tut, any1 got one? specificly animated?

[Phase228]

looks pretty good i can say a 8/10

rain needs to be more transparent like real rain
render great quality
make text blend a small bit more and it will be better

[maso420024]

I personally like it man, good job from me

[Puff]

Its alright, Julian is right, your composition is off, and its a vital part in imagery.

if you notice, they seam to be shielding themselves to the right hand side upwards, but the rain is coming in from the other direction, just small things like that.

But keep at it and you'll get a real knack for it. Good job

([Photoshop] Good rain tip: Create New Layer > Colour it Black > Add Noise to about 10/15 > Filter - Blur - Motion then angle it correctly. Then alter the Opacity.)

Also if you want to get rid of some rain for it alter the Levels RGB.

I also advise doing two layers with different density to apply depth into the image.



-Sorry for a lot of text, just applying constructive criticism-