[C&C] My latest, Gimme some 2cent

[BrightChild]

my latest, c&c always appreciated.



only thing i'm not too sure about is the unreadable text. thoughts?

[Remus3]

Only thing that gets me is the white lettering on the hand, it's become a focus point due to it but enough to where you don't fully see the girl without eye influence from it. The hand is a hot spot atm.

My suggestion would be to take the explosion effects to that letter to where the B is still clearly legible but breaking away. thus wanting it moved to the right about 10-15 pix or more

Otherwise it looks good, the unreadable test is hit or miss, making it larger makes the right side very heavy visually in brightness. I'd say keep it and tone it down a bit in opacity or remove it and see how it feels.

[BrightChild]

thanks buddy, much appreciated. i agree with you about the hand being messed with by the text, i was thinking making the text more of a very light green then maybe just moving it behind the render itself. think it might work considering you will still be able to tell its a B and all.

[Sneakylemons]

Basically a combination of what you two said. Tone the unreadable text down maybe like 15%, and move the main text layer behind the render. One other thing, I think the soft white streak going across the bottom right corner is a bit distracting, the piece might look better without it. Try it out, see what you think.