Starcraft

[Breakdown88]

Text sucks, ..i know

[Sneakylemons]

One big thing is just take out the text, I don't like it haha. Sorry. But even without it, I feel like there are three focal points. The orb in the top left, his face/eyes, and the one on his other shoulder. It draws my eyes all over the place. You need to try to keep it to one focus, and place it in a spot that coincides with the Rule of Thirds. (I'm assuming you know what that is, if not, here)

[kendelllane808]

Yeah, text sucks, but Richmond Archer Photography couldn't capture the intensity of a Starcraft Zerg rush any better!