[Large Art] CnC Please.

[Remus]

Quick points i require you to understand:
1) no i did not draw the face/hair/gun/fists
2) only non-mine piece in there is the pose itself and the above mentioned;

A)Main points I'd like CnC on. Color system of the left forearm, compared to the rest of the body(two different layering styles I did, I'm sure I can do a hybrid of the two)
B)Going for a futuristic but not fantasy futuristic combatant.
C)any other general CnC shi that should be relevant.
Will update as I go

can't find my original source, saved my bglayer
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[1337pyro]

the tightness of the trouser changes.... on the hips its like jeans and down the knees its like leggins

but the upper body is nice.

[The-Eradicator]

Could you post the original stock?


On the subject of the image, I don't know if it's unfinished or what, but the collar of her shirt needs to be blended.

[Remus]

3+ major pieces being missing; if there is no color then it is not drawn in just outlined.
after i get back from cma i'll try and find the copy of the stock i saved.

[Reflection]

I'd love to see some more lightning on the pants, sharper lightning specifically as they look a bit rough and blurry at the moment, in comparison with the torso. The upper body appears a little bit flat to me as well, some more shadowing would probably help. Overall a very good piece and I can't wait to see it come along Boots are top notch!

The brown texture on the chest I'm not so sure about, I'd like to see it a little bit more blended, kinda like the brown at her left arm.

In regards to your concern about the hand: it looks fine to me, to be honest, though it could be better. I really like the brown-ish color on the upper part of the glove and I believe it'd look better with something like that on the actual hand as it really fits with the brown on the chest and the general brown all across the model. The red/yellow going around seems a bit weird as it's heavily contrasted and therefore drags a lot of attention while the rest of the body is pretty much equally subtle. As far as I'm concerned, something like this shouldn't have such a strong focus. Not the hand, at least.

Regardless, very good but some sharper details and more dynamic lightning (look at the pants right next to the tip of the gun, some minor lightning there and it pops out a whole lot more) and it'd be even better. Keep it up! =)

I'll be sure to comment once you get around to finish/progress with it!