Gaara of the Desert

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[AfterMidnight]

Holy shit, I just re-re-rewatched episodes 48 to 50 (Rock Lee vs Gaara)
Great character, great siggeh

[Trle94]

Omggg dudeeee this is SICKKKKKK!!!! )) 10/10 DDD Like a proooo xD

[alj03]

That's awesome man. Way better then my attempt with that render.

[m0rbidang3l]

it's an alright signature. something about the white 'glow' around the render is throwing it off.
also, i'm not too fond of the composition. it leads me away from the image. i see the focal point as the eyes, and then i'm guided up to whatever is on his back and then have nowhere left to go. it would work better if the render was on the other side i think.

also, for you people who think critiquing something is an insult, you should gtfo the graphics section until you're mature enough to learn from your mistakes and other peoples' suggestions.

[[the Sills]]

focal is oversharpened, a bit empty cept for the render tbh...
good work with the c4ds tho
4/10

[Remus]

4/10.

areas of improvement:
~the face is clear but nothing else?(no i will not go watch the series as to why etc, this is unbiased)
~the white is overpowering the image into confusion, first up the text area... you see it? now notice that hard black line... yet nothing else has it, no bueno.
~the depth is moderately too blurred, the outcroppings on the left and bottom right should be clearer.
~random perfectly circular dots.. they don't look like dirt being hit up, nor is the meaning justified, as far as I can tell he is sitting with a grimace on his ankles.
~motion, there is none, no action nothing.
~character detailing, it's simply bland, little significant to even remember the person
~hand, what's up with the hand? nothing is occurring
~overall, it is alright but it could be done better.


-in summary the lack of any action beyond a lens flare to try and induce "magiks" but no source, the light source from the body is wrong to the background. and whatever is behind the left shoulder, it is unclear. (from char pov)



cleaned up since the offending posts have been removed.

[Exigious]

With the back ground, I would have tried to work more from a realism standpoint.

[Xel]

AfterMidnight got banned for his replies on this thread, 20 posts have been deleted and infractions/warnings have been given to those who were flaming/using inappropriate language.

You sure know how to behave so please do so.