First Try. Feedback?

[Faulen]

This is my first real attempt at a signature.
Didnt bother to add text, because I am not good at that sorta thing.



I don't think its too bad for a first try. I think there should be a little more green by Luigi though. And less blur on Mario.

[Ground Zero]

Looks good for a first try, better than mine. Luigi looks like Errage is behind him.

[Dobbs]

Nice, however as you said behind Luigi you need more green. Also try to add text and then some people on the forum can tell you how to make it better.

[Faulen]

Put a little more green in. Added Text.

I think the green looks good. But the text not so much.

[Dobbs]

Better however try to get some of these tutorials: http://www.mmowned.com/forums/genera...rial-shop.html (or maybe just the text one.)

EDIT: try to blend Luigi in more.

[Ground Zero]

Try and keep the text simple, it looks alot nicer.

As reflection said on one of his tutorials, use the color select tool to select a random part of your signature and make the text in that color plain and simple, add a drop shadow effect.

[Faulen]

Attempt 3:


I like the text a lot more.
Luigi is still kind of sloppy though.

[Dobbs]

better, but use a simple font. also try to remove the 'stroke' around the text and just add a drop shadow with. Distance 1px and Size 1px. Try placing the text better as well because it's crammed into a conner atm.

[Faulen]

Better font and placement?

[Dobbs]

Better font, however i would say that the font would look good near Luigi's hand and face. Also make it a light green.

[Faulen]

A little more like this?



Thanks for the help by the way.

[Dobbs]

A little more up and right. and no problems

[Faulen]

Hmm.. Like

This?


Or,
This?

[Dobbs]

just up a bit more. Also try to make the text layer 70% opacity.

[Faulen]

Almost done?