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    [Show-Off] Some of my works - Feedback welcomed

    Figured I could post some of my works, and since im always looking to improve feedback is very welcome.

    Most of them do not contain text since i've not found any use for them yet, if you plan on using them please do ask first (And do not use them on this forum as they are not in the right dimensions for it).








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    Awesome. I loved the first one .
    If only it could have my name on it ;<
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    the first one makes my nipples hard.

    1. 8/10
    2. 7/10
    3. 6/10
    4. 8/10

    they are all very good

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    Originally Posted by Caspur View Post

    Render sticks out too much. Don't center it. Background should be less cluttered, things are happening everywhere, thus my eye draws automatically to the background and not the render as it should be.
    The render's light source is towards the right while the signature has the light coming from the right. You need to work on that.


    No light source at all. Render is too much positioned to the left and I really don't like pop-up signatures. The render is poorly cut and you can clearly see the lines of it. I don't like this signature, sorry.


    The best of yours. The light source is still misplaced though.


    No. No. Awful font, awful text, bad render, misplaced, crap background. Sorry.
    You really need to work on the depth, especially when many of your signatures are conceptual.

    I'm looking forward to seeing you improve though.

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