
this is actually quite good, althought lightsource is a tad to much.
is't also very convensional, like ive seen thousands of this kind of tag.
you need to think outside the baux aka. think more creative.
and wasup with those boxes, they are every where xD

alittle messy, lightsource is too much and it also need better blending

this also not that creative :/

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sorry for low focal quality
then don't use, it's that simple

try to remove the overall redish colour it's kinda stupid to do so, maybe make the bg darker, and make some depth in your, quite okay, smudge

btw don't center your focal

blending and could you post colour version?

a c4d, clipping mask and texts(which i can't read

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did you make the c4d your self?

sqaureish bg = fail.
lq look = fail.
texts = fail
this tag = awefull, no offense.

lightsource is off, the lower one should be erased.
needs more blending.
logo makes subfocals, and that sucks, make it smaller or something
