[Rate! ^^] My -Third- Try at a Signature! ^^ C-Criticize it!

[InfernoPanda]

Here's my third signature! Hope you guys like it! And hope I've improved!

[MaxiPads]

whats with her eyes.

[Zeluous]

Better than me, Although i would like to know what that is on the right of her head.

[nothinglol]

I like it much more. However, still think there is always room for improvement.

You are using PS right? EDIT: Yes, I know that was a stupid question.

[wow4Supplier]

This time I really like it,I give it 8/10.
The blue eye does look cool,but It doesen't blend in too well...Anyway your best work so far...

[InfernoPanda]

In reply to Beefies, I think you're wondering what the big horn-looking thing is that's jutting from her head? That's a Horn. ^^ And yes, I'm using PS-CS4, And last but not least thanks ya'll! I see alot of people are concerned about the eye, I'll make it more blending here in a second, and repost the completed version in this forum! Stay tuned! ^^

[InfernoPanda]

Here we go! :] Rate please! And tell me which one is better! Any suggestions on how to make it look better will be taken!

[Distanced]

You've used the sharpen tool, or curve tool on the eye and it sticks out like a sore thumb.
Maybe make the font less obvious, using something such as overlay mode can be really effective.
Maybe fade her into the background a bit, however, she must still be the prominent feature.
I'd give it a 7/10

[Viter]

the renders / stock images you are using are ruining it.

[Reflection]

Definitely a lot better. Good job.

Still there's a few things to change, though. As last the text is still bad, I can't stress enough how important it is to not use bevel & emboss on the text. Did you add any noise around the text? It looks like it.

Also, once again, the render is shit :/ Very poor quality on the horn, looks odd.

The contrast between the Background and the focal is still a bit big. Less than your previous signature so that's an obvious sign of improvement!
Although it's better my eye gets drawn to the horn once again, then the text and then the head and last the background - might be the reason why the signature is not my biggest favourite. The horn looks like, well, crap. Something out of a 10 year old game. Always try to keep the best part of the signature the focal, i.e the render. The better the render, the better the signature is a rule to remember. Even if your background isn't 'epic', the render and the work with it might be and thus by having it your focal the entire signature gets interesting By the way, a LOT better background, good work.

As said, keep at it and you will improve. You already have and will continue to do so for a long time! Good luck.

Edit: I like long criticism! (In-before questioning) and offtopic: CarlosJ, this is your duty, where the hell are you?!

[vallon1]

No flow, render isn't blended, no depth, no lighting, no boarder, bad text.

Stick with tutorials.

[Schwummelwummel]

It looks good at all but i don't like the red of the lips, it doesn't fit in the picture

And the eyes doesn't look good, it's too different imo.. looks weird

[Gawdlaw]

5/10 sorry.