[Showoff] The Departed

[Apartment Wolf]

The Departed

CC please I really Like It, and as ever i had expert advice from Narudan.

[Piersd]

CC please I really Like It, and as ever i had expert advice from Narudan.

*cough* fanboy *cough*

the text really needs improvement lol. i like everything, apart from the stock/render. everything else has depth, but then the stock just looks flat and ruins it for me. work on your depth too :P

all the c4ds actually looks similar to narudans shiz, thats probably why you like it lol. remember not to copy his style, just learn from it and add some into your own

[Apartment Wolf]

Updated with advice from PiersGod

[Clain]

Second one has too much lighting on the focal, and could also use some more depth. On the first one as Piersd said, the stock looks well flat.