Originally Posted by
Sleepingcap
Um.. I dont know where to start..
A comic.. well.. that isnt a comic.. Thats a bunch of pictures that are somehow connected..
A comic should be a pleasure to read.. Not pain to the eyes and mind.
If you actually want to proceed with that style, then:
1) smaller images.
2) chech your grammar
3) sorry to say, it wasnt funny, maybe if you had made the story a bit more detailed, maybe then.
4) use some photoediting program other than MS Paint... If you want to add chat bubbles.. at least download the brush for the bubble and the font for the text.
5) and this quest that is about sleeping with some guys mom.. thats from "Jimmy" and it aint funny when reused somewhere else
6) the stickfigures.. if you are going with those.. make them pretty and give them a more stylish look.
Best of luck with your next ( and most likely better) comic strips.