umm looks a bit strange with the url half hidden on the left hand side, (is that intentional or was it to hide the url of the website you got the wallpaper orignianlly from?)
the render on the left is quite poor quality and has lots of white around the edges which ruins it, otherwise i think the wallpaper is a bit basic and lacking effects but it is nice for a first atttempt, personally i'd rate it a 6/10 (maybe im being harsh because its not my kind of style thoughand also the render on the left lets it down a bit imo)
i would say to improve; if you want to keep the render the add a similar glow to it, this will hide the bad rendering and also fit the flow of the walpaper. make the url text readable as its half and half which doesnt really work:S and perhaps add some gradients to the background so its not a solid colour. but not bad at all if your new, just keep practising
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kk ty dude
The guy on the left is a bad cut, he has a white outline which makes it lil choppy
i don't really like the massive bright white skull, its kinda in your face. I always like to have a focal point when im making my backgrounds, the place that catches your eye.
As far as I can see, you just got wallpaper with that skull from somewhere and added that guy. Render has poor quality, and the URL sawks5/10, sorry.
no biggy this is a first :P