[Rate] Angel Jordash

[jordash]

Well I made this by myself with no guides or anything, and if you look closely you can see a added a little C4D
So rate it out of 10 , and if something you think is wrong just give it to me straight. and also I'm aware I messed up a bit with the blur around the render

[CarlosJ]

very heavily contrasted which i think ruins it a bit, a bit of contrast is ok but a bit much like this and it ruins it and makes alot of emphasis on it. also try not to block out the rest of the sig so much with black, its good for depth but you need to add a light source because at the moment middle is extremely bright sides are extremely dark, it doesn't work.
also text is in wrong place, just looks strange there, try put it on overlay or something so it blends with the rest of the sig
hope that helps a bit, overall id give it a 6ish/10, looks pretty nice for your first