Rate my FIRST work

[Brisi[NOR]]

First siggeh i try to make Pretty satisfied whit it But some advice on how to make it bettah would be naice

[GoombaMan]

9/10 Make the Text a bit darker so its more seeable

[suicidity]

1) Readable text
2) Use a render or something to fill space and look good. ++ I has to be more eye catching than the text. Man the background fit the render.
3) Work on the background a little.

5/10

Colors are BRIGHT, needs a render, text is not readable, duplicated background.

Nice for a first though.

[Master Xintor]

I like the bright color of it but maybe darken the text some like Luke said, and depending on wether or not that darkens the text to where you can read it then take away some of the bright glitter around the text, the darkening of the color should do most of it but if it doesnt then dull the glitter, but the background and general idea of it to me are great! so +rep and 9/10

[Brisi[NOR]]

Thanks for the feed back all I'll try my best to get it better!

[~Jagris]

5/10 i cant read it