Spiderman Sig, real attempt at light.

[PrimoPie]

Ok after reading more tutorials I am trying to correctly create light based off the renders light. Please let me know if this looks correct, what needs to be changed.

[ViND_]

Lightning is okay, but background isn't.

[Remus]

back of the head should not be that blue or bright.. after all the material is red thereby a dark purplish color, way too much brightness in the background (left side)corners, they don't accentuate the scene, causing the eyes to flitter everywhere.

only 2 points of interest... 1) spiderman and 2) the assumed bubbles (first glance thought they were fish) to the left. name is in an improper position for a true circular focal.

font sticks out like a sore thumb to the background, personal opinion would be a bubbly text or if you do add fishes at any point, on the side of a fish akin to scales.

[alj03]

Try blurring the sides a little, use a Gaussian blur 1.5 and erase most of it barring the sides of the sig.

[Reflection]

Try blurring the sides a little, use a Gaussian blur 1.5 and erase most of it barring the sides of the sig.

Hide with layer masks, don't erase.

[alj03]

Hide with layer masks, don't erase.

Or go with that.

[Reflection]

back of the head should not be that blue or bright.. after all the material is red thereby a dark purplish color, way too much brightness in the background (left side)corners, they don't accentuate the scene, causing the eyes to flitter everywhere.

only 2 points of interest... 1) spiderman and 2) the assumed bubbles (first glance thought they were fish) to the left. name is in an improper position for a true circular focal.

font sticks out like a sore thumb to the background, personal opinion would be a bubbly text or if you do add fishes at any point, on the side of a fish akin to scales.

Couldn't agree more. I don't believe the font is all that bad however, it works relatively well but there are better choices. The positioning is a bit off though, yeah.

[PrimoPie]

Thanks for the info gonna jump back on the horse and try again, till i get this stuff right.

[PrimoPie]

OK, now this is yet another attempt, i think its getting better, you tell me.

[Erase]

Looks pretty decent.
It's oversharpened though.

[Mayx]

I like the second one alot better.

Good job.

[Reflection]

OK, now this is yet another attempt, i think its getting better, you tell me.

Much better, flow works, lightning is pretty good. Text works well as well. Some of the scattered lines are a bit disturbing though.

Good job

[PrimoPie]

Tried yet again, using yet another comic hero.

[Remus]

it's Captain America iirc >.>

[Grif]

I like the second one the most, and dislike the last one the most. First one is decentish, but a bit off for my liking, in a theme and color mostly