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Feedback Please
Last edited by lol97899; 07-17-2010 at 07:44 PM. Reason: Too big image
much better than i can do :P but he/she looks to have abit odd shaped head eh ? :P
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Yes i agree with that, but im working on sizes and positions
I am going to agree with Mitron here. She does have an overly large head.
Death to all but Metal.
Agree'ing with the shaped head part.
Also I kind off... noticed... a third eye at the shoulder? :P
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Not good in comparison to real Anime. (More than ever because this is more of a Manga than an Anime). Mouth looks damn weird, the Hair looks awful, the neck looks awful, the fact she has 4 eyes is disgusting, she has no shoulders and the Size difference of them eyes is way to much!
Keep improving and post here again when you are able to make something better. See this as constructive critism pls.
Agree with Sheep.
Use references for drawing at first, until you know the proportions.