[Showoff] part of the work I made during my internship

[Gawdlaw]

Newspaper ad

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Front of a folder (WIP not finished by me )

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Poster boxing match

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And a CD cover I made for one of my own customers.




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That's a few of them Don't need serious critism, since most of them weren't even my idea.. i just made them because I got asked to. So tell me what you think. =)

*I soon have to give a presentation where I show these works*
So I'm very bussy preparing it :- (


You can watch more of them here Gideon Ontwerp - Hyves.nl

[Ground Zero]

I love the fireproof one, they all are good though.

[Kiev]

Holy.... that second one is the most amazing thing i have ever seen.

The first one: I can see it was meant to be a calm design, and thats working great, the text flows with the idea too.

Second one: What else can you do to that? Thats awesome.

Third one: The effect of the images and text getting smaller has a great effect, I myself cant think of much to improve, considering most of this isn't whats usually seen here.

Fourth one: I love the text, but im not sure about the splatter in the top right, its effective, but im not sure how it wold look if it was removed, maybe better?

[Gawdlaw]

Holy.... that second one is the most amazing thing i have ever seen.

The first one: I can see it was meant to be a calm design, and thats working great, the text flows with the idea too.

Second one: What else can you do to that? Thats awesome.

Third one: The effect of the images and text getting smaller has a great effect, I myself cant think of much to improve, considering most of this isn't whats usually seen here.

Fourth one: I love the text, but im not sure about the splatter in the top right, its effective, but im not sure how it wold look if it was removed, maybe better?

I tryed it without the splatters, but I just liked it more with it for some reason. Thanks you =)

[Danne206]

Wow, the second one is amazing, great job!

EDIT: They're all great, but I fell in love with that one.

[Gawdlaw]

Wow, the second one is amazing, great job!

EDIT: They're all great, but I fell in love with that one.

Well thank you ^^ My boss om the second hand ruined the design by placing a huge crappy rainbow in it >.>

[Kiev]

Well thank you ^^ My boss om the second hand ruined the design by placing a huge crappy rainbow in it >.>

That made me laugh , that is one of the best ones there by far.

[HolyBeast]

as everyone else said, the second one is awesome

[Gawdlaw]

^^ It's one of the last once I made So I'm glad you guys think it's good.

[Reflection]

The fire on the hand doesn't look too good. The rest is cool (of that piece)

[Gawdlaw]

The fire on the hand doesn't look too good. The rest is cool (of that piece)

That's what I wanted to hear! *Because that's another thing my boss did* xD
He ruined my design XD!

[JD]

I hate it cuz it's too pro!

Pffft

Jks jks, I love it (well, some of it ofc)

[Kiev]

Looking back at it... it kinda looks like a man has blood on his two fingers he usually uses for something else, and isn't dripping onto the knuckle.

o.o

[Gawdlaw]

Looking back at it... it kinda looks like a man has blood on his two fingers he usually uses for something else, and isn't dripping onto the knuckle.

o.o

yes It sucks, I would never make a hand look burning like that >.< Phailz..
Next to that I think the whole concept haves nothing to do with the "Fireproof" But It was my Internship, so I was not going to make a argument about it with my boss xD

[Kiev]

Haha, it still looks awesome.

How you did something like that, i wont know.