Heres the newer version
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Heres the newer version
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1. Render is very blurry, and text doesn't look good.
2. Render doesn't have any connection with the flow you're trying to create, so it looks kinda fake. Also it's way oversharpened. Don't like that the 'background' is above the render. Text doesn't fit either.
1. It dont connect really, there a differenation of colours, and it all collides. And you need to make sure your text is off a different colour, or something matching but lighter.
2. What is that over the render? A zebra pattern painted red?