[Drawing] Bad Girl

[grassynole]

Acromatic style drawing of a girl, using pencil and felt.

[Remus]

4/10

why: you are over exaggerating a lot of areas, i've never seen the bra be fully under the breast, bad design considering sweat collection due to cloth riding. shoulder/wrist and hand placement are drawn awkwardly. knuckles on her right hand are too spacious, left hand glove and finger placement are off.

right arms bicepts shouldn't be shown in that position, more later depending upon your response to this critique.

i won't help those who won't admit and want help.

sorry this is short- i'm pressed for time

[grassynole]

I agree with a lot of the things u mentioned in that the knuckles are spaced out too much on the right hand, the left hand placement isn't correct i fiddled with it a bit but never really got it right ( need buy one of those model hands to use for reference.) I don't see a big problem with the biceps it could be longer and maybe angled outwards more but i don't see an issue with the general shape. Apart from the bold under line of the bra i don't see much wrong but then again i would no nothing to do with

bad design considering sweat collection due to cloth riding.

[mag1212]

i like it

[Iammud4]

Decent but you can really spice it up a bit.

[h1pp0]

She looks cross-eyed

[Evolut]

her left hand kinda looks like a talon or claw of some kind