Last edited by Gawdlaw; 09-23-2009 at 04:01 AM.
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Yet another random piece of epic junk from GawdlawNice!
XD You don't wanna know how epic the stuff in my recycle bin is. :P
Thanks for the comment Zero
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It lacks a bit of realism. The render has natural light coming from the right whilst the picture's light is coming from the horizon left off him. The right part of his cloak would also be darker since it's behind the dude, not as light as it is currently.
His left shoulder, head & basically the entire left side should be a bit lighter too.
And I don't really like the text :x
Besides that, it's good.
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Its a nice pic, I like it and it only has a few flaws that the people above me pointed out, but all together its a nice picture with a cool font good job!! =)
Nice one man, You make some 1337 shit. I could see you doing more with the shadows though. Maybe add a grainy effect in the darker areas and more of a bloom, glossy effect in the lighter areas.
Going to work on it today, thanks for the comments :=)
Updated V2. What do you think about it now?
Last edited by Gawdlaw; 09-18-2009 at 04:15 AM.
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when a hero dies.. Another one rises.. <<< when a hero dies.. Another rises..
Stop the trolling
I fix it.
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It's okay, couple of issues;
The pattern overlayed over the top doesn't really serve much purpose and seems to be the opposite style to the actual piece. The shadow is messed up on his feet and generally around the guy, and the lighting on him is quite light and soft whereas the lighting in the backdrop is far harsher. Text is a bit bright too, shade of red wise.
Except those points, it's well blended.
Changed my monitor settings @ work, and now I can see them indeed :|..
Thank you.
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