[Showoff] Some Nice Signatures

[gohanyo]

These are just some signatures i made in Photoshop, it was the first time i made them so tell me what you think and tell me what i should do to improve it.
I need tips for making text a little better.

[Zore]

Not bad signatures dude, good work.
They are a bit... i don't know.... HUGE.
But they are good, 8/10 for second.
7/10 for first.

~ Zore

[XC4T4LY5TX]

1st: 9/10 < love the dragon, but work on the txt
2nd: 6/10 < not very good

[Zore]

I think the second one is better, but it is all a matter of
opinion...

[gohanyo]

thanks, so any tips on what i should do?

[Vigorous-Vivacity]

Totally agree with XC4T4LY5TX on the first one. That looks sexy. But yeah, the text needs some reworking.
I think I understand what you're going for with the whole wind blown text, I'm assuming you're trying to make the text flow with the action of the image.

So I share his opinion of the first one with a solid 9/10 for awesomeness.

P.S. BIGGAR IS BETTAR

For the second, I'd give it a 6/10 due to the very chopped-edge look of the fractal used in the image. (Look at his left shoulder, from his perspective, not the sig's.) I feel I'd really like it a lot more if you eased up on some of the hot pink on the fractal, and did some touch up around his actual portrait by taking out the fractal shrapnel around his shoulder.

Also adding a border to the second one would help, I think. *Nod*

[Jon Lajoie]

nice sigs dude, like them both, 8/10 for both...+2rep from me

[gohanyo]

thanks so any tips on what i should do to inprove?

[tezzarist]

first off nice try on the sigs.
1) you need to work on your text. What i recomend is goto dafont and download some new fonts to play wit. Also when placing text in a sig ask your self does it go with the render/bg that you are using, does it stand out. Sometimes doing miniumaul changes such as changing the opacity to playing around with the blending options to get it that wee bit of an edge.

2) C4d's.. . your C4d is alrite but try and blend the C4d into the background or feather it a bit etc to get rid of those choppy edges.

All in all keep trying dude youl only get better.