C&C is welcome :P
No Scanlines
Softer Scanlines
Touched up Version
C&C is welcome :P
No Scanlines
Softer Scanlines
Touched up Version
Last edited by worldslayer; 04-19-2009 at 10:58 AM.
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I love it :O
It's just one thing, the scan lines is disturbing :P Especially on his cloak. They're just destroying the flow there. I love the texture of the background, good job!
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good job on the smudging and blending awesome!! i like it also scan lines are sorta in the way of the render
I disagree with both Reflection and Vemonous. I think the scan lines make it look like hes in a sand storm. What you could do is make the opacity of them a bit lower.
agree
agree
I think they're creating the flow
its a great sig
but the left side ruins it.. the colors and the contrast are too hard
The text.. isn't that good, but its okay^^
also some clipping masks are too big and you should erase some of the scanlines in the edges
SAY NO TO SCAN LINES. I hate em. this would look 10x better without them.
Narudan, I more meant on his cloak, they should be less visible there tbh.
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i like it alot but the scan lines are to visible. if u maked them more into the picture or wtf u call it it maybe looks better
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Well I personally was iffy about the scan lines in general, I didn't like them, but at the same time I liked them because they did give the image a bit more flow.
P1raten, I know you like them because you are scan line happy :P
I have 3 versions which I will upload after I eat and finish my sunday scan, one has the scan lines, one has the softer scanlines, then the ones I posted. I also will adjust the contrast and do some slight touching up on the clippings. I have only used clipping a couple times and thanks to Reflection I am starting to like it so I might get a bit carried away haha.
I did not know what to do with the text though so that was the outcome. Any ideas anyone? Feel free to link me to a sleek sexy font for it :P
Also, I would really like to thank Reflection and Narudan in this one, for both of their tutorials, Narudan you helped me with my smudging a lot actually. Reflection, you have started pulling me away from straight smudge, which I actually never thought would happen.
I am glad this post has gotten as many comments as it has in the last 8 or 9 hours.
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