[Showoff/Question] What more should i do?

[djCorrupT]

Hey, i just made this a few hours ago for a friend. what else should i add to it? he said he does not want any color or anything.

also, what do you think of ? I designed it but friend made it in photoshop.

[Mirror]

1st) Take away the random binary at the bottom unless it's needed, I don't know why but it just feels misplaced or something... but 9/10 since that's the only flaw .

2nd) Maybe add a skull in the middle of it popping out or something? 8/10

Or maybe you could add a picture of a heart kind of like the one from Green Days Album.

[djCorrupT]

hrm, alright ill take that into consideration thx

[Bunster]

Do what u like lol,

[worldslayer]

1.) Looks good, I agree that the Binary at the bottom is kinda out of place. Maybe add more binary over the entire image and then just have it gradient mapped to thicken in opacity was it nears the bottom. End result might be a bit lighter than it is now (binary) imo.

2.) The focal seems to suddenly drop (near the bottom of the focal point) with that flat line, maybe fix that. Perhaps adding a radial gradient map to it as well, might help it.