[Showoff / Rate & CC] vector sig 1st time

[Ease]

normally i do c4d /smudge but then i saw peirsd do some vector so i did a little peice.. i know its crap but im getting back into vector again after awhile ..


rate and cc plz.

[Apartment Wolf]

Sxc for a vector 7/10

Im trying to vector and can't do it QQ

[CarlosJ]

tbh youre vectoring looks very basic, and as though you did it in paint. the lines are very jagged/pixelated and not smooth. use the pen tool for that to get smooth lines.

i see you used a arrow brush of sorts but youve filled it with green and not fully erased around the edges of the shape makin git look sloppy. the circular spodges on the right are also too condesned and need to be serperated out more.

overall its just lacking much real detail tbh, its a good start but it neds some work to finish it off. those areas include; the vectoring, the colours of the vectors(putting green lines on a green background with a green stock just means they done stand out like a vector should), and the shapes should follow the flow of the sig more, on both shoulders you have shapes that ruin the flow of the stock, the lines you did in the center work well but the two areas i highlighed dont folow the natural flow within the sig.