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[The Grim Reaper]

Thats My Newest Piece, I'd Like You To Give It A Rating From 1 To 10 And If You Don't Like It Tell Me What You Don't Like About It And How You Think i Could Make it Better.

[CarlosJ]

i like the colours, the neon blue kinda glow and the whole concept of the wallpaper. however i do feel its a bit simple in places, e.g. you could have done some more work with the brushes and also added varying effects to the fractals. i think the earth also needs a bit of work as currently its quite pixelated. the top of the earth is extreemley bright, it needs to be more gradual to complement the depth of it.(look at the one at the end for an idea regarding the light) the earth clouds just seem to pixelated and need softening a bit. also would be nicer to see more land rather than lots of white bits to provide better contrast against the rest of the wallpaper.
i really like your text, its the right size/colour and fits very well with the theme of the wallpaper. overall nice job just needs a few touch ups to helps improve the realism (if thats what you want) because atm it is fairly abstract in a sense because the art isn't that realistic.

heres an example of a similar wallpaper where i think the lighting is "better" and thus helps improve the depth and realism of it : (i didnt make it credits to IxrevivalxI)

[The Grim Reaper]

i like the colours, the neon blue kinda glow and the whole concept of the wallpaper. however i do feel its a bit simple in places, e.g. you could have done some more work with the brushes and also added varying effects to the fractals. i think the earth also needs a bit of work as currently its quite pixelated. the top of the earth is extreemley bright, it needs to be more gradual to complement the depth of it.(look at the one at the end for an idea regarding the light) the earth clouds just seem to pixelated and need softening a bit. also would be nicer to see more land rather than lots of white bits to provide better contrast against the rest of the wallpaper.
i really like your text, its the right size/colour and fits very well with the theme of the wallpaper. overall nice job just needs a few touch ups to helps improve the realism (if thats what you want) because atm it is fairly abstract in a sense because the art isn't that realistic.

heres an example of a similar wallpaper where i think the lighting is "better" and thus helps improve the depth and realism of it : (i didnt make it credits to IxrevivalxI)

Thanks For The Great Critique Carlos ^_^ Most Of My Work Isn't Geared Towards Realism But Your Advice With The Lighting And Such Will Help Me In the Future.

EDIT : By The Way Its Not Supposed To Be The Earth It's Another Planet :P Thats Why It Doesn't Have As Much Land And Stuff.

[CarlosJ]

Thanks For The Great Critique Carlos ^_^ Most Of My Work Isn't Geared Towards Realism But Your Advice With The Lighting And Such Will Help Me In the Future.

EDIT : By The Way Its Not Supposed To Be The Earth It's Another Planet :P Thats Why It Doesn't Have As Much Land And Stuff.

npps, wel yeah thats just personal preference, i personally prefer more realistic work thats at the same time abstract and futuristic but i'm not going to change your style its good to be individual. its just a few basic things like lighting i think can help improve the depth and in turn compisition of the piece

ahhh loll my apologies thought it was earth because it was blue and had the odd spot of land, lol perhaps make it red? just to give contrast against the blue and also to make it more obvious its not earth (its not necessary its just from my opinion looking at it as earth it seems like you missed bits out, which you havent as its not earth)
can just imagine the planet as a nice warm red (like mars) with perhaps a saturn dust ring round it, that will add to the detail of it although may be quite advanced and tricky to do, but im not sure on your skill level. don't get me wrong its a nice piece its just perhaps you could also do it in a red style as i can imagine it could work quite well, with perhaps the odd star dotted in the background and maybe a passing meteor? (just a few more additions that might help add a bit more variety to the piece)

[The Grim Reaper]

npps, wel yeah thats just personal preference, i personally prefer more realistic work thats at the same time abstract and futuristic but i'm not going to change your style its good to be individual. its just a few basic things like lighting i think can help improve the depth and in turn compisition of the piece

ahhh loll my apologies thought it was earth because it was blue and had the odd spot of land, lol perhaps make it red? just to give contrast against the blue and also to make it more obvious its not earth (its not necessary its just from my opinion looking at it as earth it seems like you missed bits out, which you havent as its not earth)
can just imagine the planet as a nice warm red (like mars) with perhaps a saturn dust ring round it, that will add to the detail of it although may be quite advanced and tricky to do, but im not sure on your skill level. don't get me wrong its a nice piece its just perhaps you could also do it in a red style as i can imagine it could work quite well, with perhaps the odd star dotted in the background and maybe a passing meteor? (just a few more additions that might help add a bit more variety to the piece)

I'm Planning On Creating A Lava-Like Solar Planet Next Although That Will Take Quite A While Due To All The Detail That Goes Into The Surfaces Of Those Planets.
For that Piece Ill make Sure To Follow Your Advice And Add Some More Details To The Background to Make it More Visually Attractive. And My Skill Level.....ITS OVER 9000! :P (Sorry I Couldn't Resist)

[Sublimepwns_]

i like 10/10 im gonna use as my wallpaper if you dont mind

[The Grim Reaper]

i like 10/10 im gonna use as my wallpaper if you dont mind

^_^ I Don't Mind At All Infact It Makes Me Happy That People Are Using It. Do You Want It Converted To A Lower Res? Or Is This Hi-Res Okay?

[Sublimepwns_]

i just used strecth and it looks perfect

[Sublimepwns_]

i really like this btw like i said before but i love those circle thingys are those brushes? if so may i have a download link?

[The Grim Reaper]

i really like this btw like i said before but i love those circle thingys are those brushes? if so may i have a download link?

If You Mean The Things That Look Like Two O's Put Together Then Yeah Those Are A Brush And Here's The Link Radon Brushes