[Showoff]Sigs made on my new PC

[Narudan]

Sigs i made in the last 4-5 days, Feedback plx


Very simple sig, didnt turn out good


Something different, the tree is a brush, the mountain is a stock which i edited a little.


another one, inspired by a tut but wasnt really following it^^


Upped this one. First real human one with some c4d

[sinfonik]

picture #3 is awsome

[Narudan]

Thanks
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[CarlosJ]

Thanks
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wow nice variation of work there. instantly i am drawn towards the jessica one, its quite a simple concept but i think its been exectuted quite well. i love the fiery kind of feel it has, created mainly by the c4ds and the effects youve added to the render.

number one personally not to keen on, its not really my kind of style and just looks a bit to simple and plain. the render looks nicely vectored, not sure if thats your work or the renders but either way finish is good, other than that just seems a bit "unfinished"/lacking in places. number 2; tbh i dont have much to say to help, it is what it is. its a lot of careful brush work and i like the finished outcome but theres only so much you can do with it and i think you've achieved that.

now i was drawn to this originally but then drawn to the jessica one more so because of the lack of colour in this. the left "wall" looks nice and works really well in the sig against the render, but after looking again at it, it just appears a bit flat. the bottom half of the "wall" is to blurred and doesnt have a clear solid edge. try emphasising the wall edges by using dark brushes to help it stand out.
the lighting is nice and helps with the depth which is important with the whole idea of the render(altáir) grabbing the wall. the colours match well with this, and i really like the effects on his hidden blade, just helps to give an extra dimension to the sig and helps the flow. the text looks good and matches the style but i'm confused what its meant to say:S(i see the narudan bit, the rest i cant make out)

overall nice variety of work

[Narudan]

Thanks for your criticism, youre always helping
well, is just experimented on the first one usually i would have deleted this kind of sig >_>
The Jessica Alba sig was the first one i used c4ds as a visible render and i think for the first time it came out ok, but the colors
in the third sig the red text says: Assasins and tsa197 is my name on a variety of other forums

[CarlosJ]

ahh kool that makes sense then, i wondered what tsa stood for. perhaps consider making assasins a bit more visible though as for me atleast it looks like "as s"
but it looks kool where it was just an idea to move it incase its actually necessary to be seen.

also just thought of this, not sure if you are sitll doing improvements on those sigs but might be an idea to sharpen the "wall" a bit, this will give the effect of focus, so the render is blurred a bit, and the arm slowly gets into focus with the wall and hand being sharpened.
this can work both ways, so blur the wall and hand and sharpen the render aswell. it was just bugging me trying to figure out why the wall looked flat and i think thats it, the wall "the foreground" is the same focus as the "background", the render. they should be different to show depth, but hey thats just been picky and trying to find things for the future

[Narudan]

picky? that helped alot, thanks again

[Juicyz]

Yeah, narudan Really Nice, I like on how Sig 3, The assassin dude (forgot his name) is holding onto the rock, did you put the rock there, or was it preset into the picture??? Anys Ways Well Done I also Liked the different layers of cloud you made, like the colors and how they are st ontop of each other.. Can you give me the brushes you made for the trees?? Either give me a PM or put it in my Resource/Tutorial Thread Thank You

[Narudan]

I got the brushes from a brushes pack in your thread ;D
In the Altair sig, (with 2 points on the "i") i added the wall manually (google pictures -> wall ^^)