{M}[Wip] Suzuki Motorbike

[mike19910]

Hey everyone, since i have been doing lots of weapons, i decided to try to create something new, now the pics you will see are from the bike in the early steps, i need to improve some things in it and i have to study mount point for it to be completed, but until that day arrives, tell me what you think so far, ohh btw the pics are a bit retarded... it looks like the bike is a bit distorced but i guarantee you that doest happen in the model itself, its just a stupid angle...

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If you have any critics or suggestions dont hesitate on posting!

[samaron]

I like it. Very nice done actually!
But.. You should try to make the rear brake disk a bit rounder. It looks kinda square.

[XjuanitoX]

Damn i want it!!!

[^Xayo]

lol, did someone else notice that he always uses the same angles ??
THis is due to the reason that these are actually NEARLY 2d linearts..
srsly dude, no skills at all

[Dwight K. Schrute]

Mike, I am not trying to flame you, but as Xayo said, it seems that they are all 2d. And not only that, but it seems like they are taken out of pictures. IMO, you should make the models from scratch to look like them. They will look much nicer.

[Soluhe]

onehand or twohand or maybe offhand =?

no sry i dont like it... looks a little bit crappy

[mike19910]

IM gonna post new pics from every angle so you can see its not 2d...

[themaster]

the lines are not straight i mean it looks like you had a lil bit speed making it .. which makes the tiers not really round

[Yamachi]

OK, here's how mike does it...
He gets a 2d image, traces round it, adds in some extra vertices, and pops them up a bit. He then clones all the vertices, mirrors the clone, and welds some of the vertices together.
Modelling skills = none
Every single one of your models is WAAAAAY too flat, because of the way you're doing them. At least take some time to do it properly, and not make them look so shitty... Sorry, but I'm just fed up with you popping out these crap models almost every damn day.
Lineart fails.

[Nomiss]

IM gonna post new pics from every angle so you can see its not 2d...

People are just jealous cuz you got talent. I like your work, no one else does it like you. Keep it up mate!

[Yamachi]

People are just jealous cuz you got talent. I like your work, no one else does it like you. Keep it up mate!

Jealous? XD HAHAHAHA! You have no idea Do me a favour, and stop kissing ass. Have you ever actually taken the time to download this guy's models and look at them? They are ALL almost 2D... It's pathetic. Where's the so-called "talent" in that?

[mike19910]

People are just jealous cuz you got talent. I like your work, no one else does it like you. Keep it up mate!

Thx for the support m8, and i just wanted to say ty to all of the guyz who gave their oppinions in this thread ( Goods and bads ) cause they sure are important to me. Im sure I will evolve as a model editor, but first i have to learn how to work with 3ds max :S, i dont want to sound cocky or anything but im realy glad i have ppl that like my job since im only 15, have lots of low time on hands, and just started modeling in less than 2 months, so i guess i just have to do lots and lots of "Crappy 2d models" to improve my ninja skills :P peace out.

[Osian100]

Mike, lets be honest the items I've seen you do look very impressive, you shouldnt give a shit what flamers say in this thread, you've earned contributor from people impressed with your work. If you did shitty models, would you have as many reps as you have now?

Keep up the good work mate

[Yamachi]

If you did shitty models, would you have as many reps as you have now?

Yes, because a picture is worth a thousand words, and a thousand words can be so many lies... Because of the angles the models are taken at, and the textures used, they LOOK 3D... A lot of the people that repped him didn't even bother to DL the model to actually see how good it was. There are some very damn good modellers here on MMOwned, but mike is not one of them atm.

i guess i just have to do lots and lots of "Crappy 2d models" to improve my ninja skills

[sissi]

nice im so gonna use this