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    [Rate! ^^] My second try at a Signature! Very bloody! hehe.

    Hey guys, This is my second try at a signature, I believe I did much better this time! ^^ Rate me please, 1-10!


    [Rate! ^^] My second try at a Signature! Very bloody! hehe.
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    Probably like... 4

    It should be wider and lower.

    Have the pic be something from resident evil maybe :P

    GL

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    It's a bit...sharp.

    Maybe try my tutorial?
    http://www.mmowned.com/forums/graphi...-20-steps.html

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    Odd size for a signature. This forum doesn't allow such high signatures.

    The text is, sorry to say it but someone gotta say it, awful. Never use such obvious effect such as Bevel & Emboss in a signature. Also, sans serif fonts usually yields a lot more professional result. Cool and swirly fonts is most likely shit. Do not place the text in a corner and try to fit the color with the signature. You did here, kind-of, but the emboss ruined it. By placing the text in a corner you just "mark" the signature, the text and the whole signature is supposed to broadcast the name.

    Try to blend the render with the background, the contrast between them is too big and the render sticks out too much.

    Also your focal is approximately every time the render, not the background. The eye gets drawn to the lightest and sharpest point of the signature. Your render here is darker than the background and looks more blurred. I can't help getting drawn to between the red part and his horn of the signature because it's the part of the signature with the most saturation & contrast.

    Last thing is not your fault I suppose, but the render looks like crap to be honest, very bad quality.

    I do not say all of this to be mean, rather I try to give constructive criticism. Consider what I've said for the next signature you create and I'm confident you'll improve.

    Good job for the effort though and keep it up, glad to see another face in the graphics section.

    Edit: Got a bit long, sorry :/

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    Originally Posted by Reflection View Post

    Edit: Got a bit long, sorry :/
    Yet all true.

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    I give it a 3 1/2.

    Too fat!!

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    Thanks everyone for the cc! ^^ I'm working on another as we speak! hopefully this comes out more professional.

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