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    Hello friends!

    If possible, I need someone correcting some english paragraphs, , im trying to pass the B1 exam.

    On chapter six Antonio visited his old friend from Wales Gareth because Gareth was getting married, they know eachother since childhood because their parents were classmates at university and they spent their summer holydays together in Almeria.

    Once time in Cardiff Antonio was impressed about the place, it remembered him cinderella's castle so he asked about it , he didn't has an answer but he introduced his cousin to Antonio who could tell him about it.

    The first time Antonio saw Anjharad he gets in love so Gareth recommends him to give her a lovespoon , its a tradition in Wales to give one when you are interested in someone.

    After they were talking about the castle and their lives finally Antonio gave her the lovespoon and asked for a dinner. She agreed the invitation

    Thanks in advance.
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    Hello friends!
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    English is my native tongue, I'm American, by the way.

    Fix:
    In chapter six Antonio visited his old friend from Wales because Gareth was getting married. They have known each other since childhood; their parents were classmates at University and they spent their summer Holidays together in Almeria.
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    One time at Cardiff, Antonio was impressed about the place, it reminded him of Cinderella's Castle so out of curiosity he asked about it, he didn't have an answer but he introduced his Cousin to Antonio who could tell him more about it.
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    The first time Antonio saw Anjharad he fell in love; Gareth recommended him to offer her a Lovespoon. It's a tradition in Wales to gift a Lovespoon to someone you're interested in romantically.
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    After Anronio and Anjharad talked about the Castle and to each other; Antonio handed her the Lovespoon and asked her out on a date for dinner. She lovingly accepted his invitation.
    Last edited by Kinkeh; 12-16-2013 at 08:15 PM.

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    So great thanks you man
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