[critic] new work

[EliMob441]

doing a new thing , not so good

[CarlosJ]

lol i disagree i think it is very nice, although i have some confusion with the lighting, theres some in the right and left.
but i really love the brushing, lines they look really kool and the way that the car render blends is really nice (i like the motion effect) and the text is awesome it really blends with the sig and doesnt stand out too much. overalli really like it, so considering its something new really good job

[Spurven]

I was going yo type Exactly what Carlosj said

[Nemorosa]

It's good, but looks really unfinished. Car is "hanging" too much. Just brush more and it'll look ace.