Looking for C&C on a near finished sig.

[BrightChild]

This is a sig i've been working on for a while, one of those things you work on and have to leave alone for a bit. I personally feel like the right side (of the body) is a little too bright and doesn't match the other side. I also think the brightness of the name itself is too much. Any C&C and stuff i should maybe try out would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

It is NOT done, but i think it's close enough to be able to share it and ask for others opinions.

[firepong]

I say blend BrightChild into the background like you have your current sig and it would look pretty good.

P.S. It took me forever to see that that was in fact a face and something else there

[Sneakylemons]

I would say pop out the blue/purple a little bit more, feels too dull. Not too much to where it becomes distracting and contrast, just a bit. Not entirely sure how I feel about the napkin in her hand on the right, might be a bit distracting. Also don't know if it would be good to maybe add some sort of diagonal stripe (like pure black or a mask) to the text to mirror the strip of black in the top left, plain white glow seems a little too simple for the chaos going on in the background. Just my 2c, lemme know what you think