Originally Posted by
Narudan
Dude since when do you have a tablet?
The canvas is a little too big, the image would be more interesting if the details would be more present.
And: A dancer? Those images are so overused. At least you picked one nobody knows.
Now: Her feet are just great. But you don't look at her feet. You may look at that big empty space on the right with some pattern in it. The rest of the background is great, so simplistic and elegant, not taking away attention but still looking good. But then - a X-Pattern? Mmmmmh.
Her hair is kind of weird but whatever, it's not really a problem. The double chin is, though :P too much retouch on that face. I like those lines on her clothes, you could have drawn more on her.
The text is really cool, but that black, pencil-drawn-looking style makes me want to see more of it and less uninteresting background.
Overall it looks like a really great style but if you want to make another piece like that one you should put more time in it and draw much more, because drawing like that is awesome.
Great lightning, Great drawing, Great "stuck"-feeling, canvas is too big, the blue of the background is too blue, that girl is hot.