Halo Signature.

[Maydie]

Hi MMOwned. I'd like to share a signature i just made, which i'm actually kinda satisfied with.
I'm posting this cause i'd like you to share your thoughts.




Do your worst.

[Jutt]

Finding the render in that rubble is tougher than it should be imo but I have seen much worse

[Blinnk]

Hmm, it seems a LQ, and the Halo guy which i assume is meant to be your focal needs to be moved close to the centre imo, and it needs to stand out a bit more.

GJ though, hope to see some more of your work.

[Grif]

Not exactly my taste, as its way to bright. And the white lines up and down even more so. But overall it looks quite ok.

[alj03]

Maybe give it a black border instead of white. It is pretty bright and I am unable to the render with ease. Keep it up though!

[Reflection]

Scrap the border altogether, in my honest opinion. The signature is interesting but the heavy lightning destroys it a little bit. Especially the lightning at the very left, it's extremely unnecessary as its only effect is ruining the balance and contrast. The render is also a bit too much to the right for my taste, I'd love to see it a bit more centered. You have the base, good colors and flow, but the lightning is too bright.

[Maydie]

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, now i can improve on these points you've all made. : ]