Starcraft marine

[alj03]

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CnC please.

[weezyC]

I like the first one a lil. But is the gun suppose to look like that? lol, looks a little weird to me.
The light source is nice !

[Grif]

Same as i posted in other thread, Black and White can be very cool. But in this one the colored version is much better to me, i aswell like the light, and ALSO agree on the gun size ;D but i guess its the render

[Erase]

Rules of Third would probably be helpful on this signature.
Some work on the Depth would probably do well too.
In my opinion, the light hits the render pretty well. But the color hitting the face of the render, is pinkish/purpleish, while the light hitting the other parts is white/yellowish.

[Reflection]

Rules of Third would probably be helpful on this signature.
Some work on the Depth would probably do well too.
In my opinion, the light hits the render pretty well. But the color hitting the face of the render, is pinkish/purpleish, while the light hitting the other parts is white/yellowish.

The light is rarely colored but the surface it hits is. Which, in this case would actually lead to the purple hint in the reflected light. Your other points are valid however

[Glynbeard]

Ughhh Terran. This makes me sad

The gun looks a little off, but overall I like it.

[alj03]

The render's gun isn't that great, also the render has that reflection light thingo on it.

And to SheEpYW0lf: I am still trying to grasp the rule of thirds. As well as that, the renders arm on the right cuts off, hence putting it on the edge.

[Erase]

Red crosses = Rules of Thirds
Green circles = Points that should be hitting the crosses.

[alj03]

Red crosses = Rules of Thirds
Green circles = Points that should be hitting the crosses.

Ah didn't know text was included, well thanks.

[Erase]

Everything on there is. It's the composition.

[alj03]

Everything on there is. It's the composition.

OK thanks SheEpYW0lf.