[SHOWOFF] Coming out of Retirement

[m0rbidang3l]

So, I'm sure my name has passed out of the memory of the graphics section here.
It's probably been over a year since I made a forum signature.
Well, after browsing and looking at what other people were doing, I got inspired to make a new piece.
Tell me what you think about it. What you like, what you hate, what you would change.
And if you feel all that is too challenging, just give it a simple rating.

Now that all that is done, here it is:

[Matt]

cool looking graphic welcome back

[Sneakylemons]

I would say make the render a bit more visible, it looks a bit soft brush erased to me, also move the text near the focus, I actually didnt see it for a while, dont hide it. idk it just looks kinda weird to me =/

*Edit: Welcome back btw

[Xel]

Make the text more visible and work a little more on that C4D on the top-right corner. Oh and also - Welcome back!

[Remus]

Hai hoe, msn sometime >.< -- also i don't have your number anymore (changed phones sim card was crappd)

nice, the text could use a bit more "look here" attributes, @sneak doesn't really need to be near the focus mind you, that creates negative space. +rule of thirds.

[Sneakylemons]

Didnt really mean near the render as much as I meant just not tucked away in a corner somewhere making it hard to read =/

[Reflection]

Welcome back