[ShowOff] Gift of the Electron - LP

[Drunne]

done for a LP contest. Another attempt at Cinema 4D




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Gift of the Electron by ~ShadorX on deviantART

[Ground Zero]

That's sweet. Very sweet.

[[the Sills]]

Looks awesome, although the text doesnt feel like its in the picture but just written on it, if thats what you want keep it but otherwise maybe make it more 3d or sth :3

[Drunne]

@GZ <3

@Sills, nah didn't want it to be 3d, it's all intended :P

[Kiev]

Thats hot. Very hot.

[Reflection]

Text doesn't fit at all. The image is boring and the lightning looks fake and not in perspective what-so-ever. Sorry, but I don't really like it. The 3d effect is cool but it doesn't help the rest of the image

Improve or remove the lightning, spice it up with some color and it'll look better.

[King Protos]

I love the boxes, looks very awesome. The ring in the cylinder hole doesn't really fit, but overall very awesome :P