[Opinion]

[xUrbanx]

Need a opinion on this text for a shirt i'm making. I will be making a logo later and will update this post and bump it when i have decided what to go with.

[Dragonshadow]

It doesn't look good tbh. The contouring kills it.

[xUrbanx]

Yeah i didn't think so either.
BTW this is most likely going on a black shirt.
I will keep updating this with new versions.

[xUrbanx]

New text up. Did a simple text this time.

[Krip]

The outer and inner glows will not be nearly as detailed in the print.

In my opinion need to definitely redesign it. Feel free to add designs and such, but you need to remember that when using tons of colors that the print will cost more as well as be less detailed.

[xUrbanx]

Only working with three colors, blue black and white.

posted text with a possible design behind it, idk if im feeling this one too much because the colors look weird when i posted it here and the corners of the design don't look the same as they do on my computer on here, maybe it's just the background. Just testing things seeing what might look good. if anyone has idea let me know.

[Vigorous-Vivacity]

Ahem: Hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

Yeah, I like the "kind" of thing you're going for, but the - approach kind of hurts. Find an alternative, or tone down the glowyness, in my own opinionage. It's just a seizure caused by layer stylization. Inner glow, outer glow, and gradient overlay, to be exact.

It just needs more variety.
As for the background image itself, I'm getting more the vibes of blob opposed to the whispy smoke I really want to see.

Give it a few more rough drafts, you'll get it rolling.

[xUrbanx]

Ahem: Hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

Yeah, I like the "kind" of thing you're going for, but the - approach kind of hurts. Find an alternative, or tone down the glowyness, in my own opinionage. It's just a seizure caused by layer stylization. Inner glow, outer glow, and gradient overlay, to be exact.

It just needs more variety.
As for the background image itself, I'm getting more the vibes of blob opposed to the whispy smoke I really want to see.

Give it a few more rough drafts, you'll get it rolling.

Thanks for the positive feed-back. I'm gonna do AT LEAST 5 different ones. That's it for today though getting late and i need to do something else.