[Show Off] New Signature!

[Mango Jerry]

Show Off - Mango Jerry's Signature!

Please rate and comment my Signature.
I'd like to hear your opinion about the Signature and what i should do better.
Im kinda new with PhotoShop, and i used no Tutorial for this Signature.

Thanks a bunch

P.S: I made the Signature in 25/30 Minutes.

[[Royal]]

It's very good for being new, and under the time limit you had. I also like how you did the text, it looks very nice. Keep it up!

I'd only brush this out with a soft brush:

[Mango Jerry]

Thats allways nice to hear a great comment/feedback, Royal.
Thanks alot, and yes, i will continue making Artworks/Signatures etc.

EDIT: Thanks for the Feedback/EDIT Royal. And i also just edited my Signature, and im currently Uploading it.

[Reflection]

Burn the lower part of his pants, the harsh blue is a way too big contrast to the comfortable orange tone.

The effect you made on the text looks very cool but in my opinion it should be a bit closer to the focal. I would place it on the right side of the signature and a bit closer.

You should work on blending the render with the background though, right now the difference between them is too big.

It looks a lot better than most signatures I've seen new artists create but yet again keep in mind what I've said for your next signature Keep at it!

Oh and, add a subtle gradient map ontop of it, usually makes it better.

[Mango Jerry]

Thanks for your Feedback.
Im currently leaving my Signature alone as it is from now on.
Im might going to edit it, but not today.

Im not the best with PhotoShop yet, but i will try teaching myself and continue making Signatures etc.
Im still a Beginner, as i started serious yesterday.

Thanks again

EDIT: I just used the Bright Tool, to show a little bit more of the Person in the Middle of the Signature (Render).

[Juicyz]

umm The text could use work, but its tricky. also the ligth source isnt in the right place, it should be at the right top of the renders head. its the natural flow of the render. yeah burn the pants, also the render looks over sharpened or something, make it blend better. try blurring lightly the edges but good job.