[Showoff] .boo | Zakattak

[Zakattak]

What do you think? Tell me what I can improve and what not.

This is mine, I made it for someone who requested it in my shop on another forum.

[Clain]

I don't like where the text is, and it looks like you sharpened the background more than the render. Thats it from me.

[Zakattak]

I blurred the background and sharpened the render, but whatever.

[Mirror]

Very cool 8/10. Maybe add a cool c4d and some brush strokes on the left side.

(lol strokes...).

[Piersd]

the body is missing?

[Chickensoup]

Would look much better if you sharpened the background.

[cXm0d]

I like how it looks like he's blurring into the background, but the render itself is much to sharp for the effect.
Good job, but I think you should soften the whole thing.

[worldslayer]

I like how it looks like he's blurring into the background, but the render itself is much to sharp for the effect.
Good job, but I think you should soften the whole thing.

o.O

the body is missing?

that is my question. The body kinda looks like a head that is just kinda floating there.

[JuniorTechnician]

that is my question. The body kinda looks like a head that is just kinda floating there.

I think you should blur the body into the background at the edges, it looks like you erased the body completely.