[Show-Off] First Image Edit

[Reflection]

Here's my first image edit, I've just done signatures and some wallpapers before.

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After:



Constructive Criticism please.

[Narudan]

Great edit, i love the light rays, the text is the only thing i could critizice but its still 8/10,

Looks better than the tutorial outcome^_°

[Reflection]

I didn't follow the tutorial. I just got some ideas from there.

[Narudan]

Oh, alright, still looks better =P

[Reflection]

Thank you Narudan. Anyone else?

[CarlosJ]

looks great, i love the lighting and the effects surrounding the light source, perhaps the drop shadow on the text was a bit unnecessary but nonetheless the piece looks nice. i especially like how the details further from the light source have become blurrier and have a ripply/artistic effect to them. the piece has great composition and i think yours complements the original well in that area, but overall is a more effective piece

[sniped910]

Great Job for your first try

[Reflection]

Thank you Carlos, as always I love your criticism

And thank you too, Sniped.

[zxzwa]

kinda took things from the tut.. ;;