[Show off]practice

[Syplex23]

okay i did some practice since my last sig show off tell me what you think

before

after


please don't flame lol i've had some practice

[CarlosJ]

i think it looks preety nice, the colour choice go well and the light source behind his head helps add a bit of depth.
i think that you need to add some dark patches (can be done with burn tool) to help add depth against the background.
also perhaps change the opacity of the border slightly (or the layering) and its a bit too heavy ove the render.
can see your improving, and the text fits well. so next time try incorporate some brush work around the render to blend it a bit more with the background

[Syplex23]

i think it looks preety nice, the colour choice go well and the light source behind his head helps add a bit of depth.
i think that you need to add some dark patches (can be done with burn tool) to help add depth against the background.
also perhaps change the opacity of the border slightly (or the layering) and its a bit too heavy ove the render.
can see your improving, and the text fits well. so next time try incorporate some brush work around the render to blend it a bit more with the background

thanks for the feedback carlos you give good advice

[Waspp]

I think evrything is awsome exept the border ^^ Its good to see you have got your'e own style what brushes do you use? +Rep

[Syplex23]

I think evrything is awsome exept the border ^^ Its good to see you have got your'e own style what brushes do you use? +Rep

ill give ya all of my brushes if thats okay...?

[Waspp]

ill give ya all of my brushes if thats okay...?

Would be awsome! Thanks!

[Syplex23]

Would be awsome! Thanks!

kk just gotta upload them
EDIT: btw i added some stuff to it in the main post have a look

[Waspp]

cool, blured render dubble, darker backround and a new border
Btw the blu stripes in the backround, are those a c4d or a brush?

[Syplex23]

cool, blured render dubble, darker backround and a new border
Btw the blu stripes in the backround, are those a c4d or a brush?

its a brush oh and here are all my brushes
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[Anarchy [RD]]

im downloading em too

i can always use more, but dude, i love ur new one

i made u a sig aswell, when i got bored, but scrapped it because
u got one from pier

[Waspp]

its a brush oh and here are all my brushes
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did u use any c4d or any renders exept the sprite?
Thanks for the brushes, i'm gonna try em out now DD

[Syplex23]

did u use any c4d or any renders exept the sprite?
Thanks for the brushes, i'm gonna try em out now DD

yea i used a c4d some exploding one

[Adosi]

Gj keep up the work!

[Syplex23]

Gj keep up the work!

thanks adosi