[Show-Off/CC] A Different Style of Sig

[Piersd]

Yeah as title says, i tried a different style of sig. Was just trying to make one of my sigs but it didn't work with a white background.
Then i remember seeing something like this... so why not have a shot?

Constructive criticism please

[Reflection]

Not to be harsh but I think it's too bright for me, your old style definitely is alot better. I suggest you keep working on this style or go back to your old style (which rocks). But overall, except that it's alittle too bright for me, I think it's pretty neat. Rate; 7.5/10

[Piersd]

i'm not changing my style, i was just simply trying something new. i never really thought it was that bright, but everyones got their own opinion

thanks for the feedback

[Reflection]

Well, maybe it's just me XD What can I say, I like dark.

[jordash]

Looks kinda've like a vector sig but way too bright on his left arm.

[Spurven]

I agree jordash, it looks to bright on his arm, but it's still freaking awesome

[Waspp]

Nothing wrong with it all, its super cool. tough it could be a little darker:

[Me0w]

I don't really like all the brightness you put on your signatures, it makes the render look really flat. Other than that, good job.

[CarlosJ]

being honest at first looking at it i wasnt too keen on it, but after second looks and really looking into it i like it alot
mianly because its different, but its just so bright and clean its a great change that i think works well. its quite simple/abstract/vector like but i think all the themes work well together and complement each other. perhaps the light source is a bit bright but i think thats just the contrast against the rest of the white in the sig that makes it look like that. for future though, i know its meant to be a vector ish kind of sig look but it would be nicer if the render did have a bit more depth to it

[Piersd]

ah right, guess it was too bright lol >.< i couldn't really make it look darker coz then everything would've been grey

thanks for the cc everyone

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put them both up so you can see the difference, hopefully its a little less bright

[Narudan]

Very nice style, and the render looks great, but i think you could add a little source of light in the second one, just to make it fit more in the background.

I think Waspps was pretty nice XD

[Syplex23]

being honest at first looking at it i wasnt too keen on it, but after second looks and really looking into it i like it alot
mianly because its different, but its just so bright and clean its a great change that i think works well. its quite simple/abstract/vector like but i think all the themes work well together and complement each other. perhaps the light source is a bit bright but i think thats just the contrast against the rest of the white in the sig that makes it look like that. for future though, i know its meant to be a vector ish kind of sig look but it would be nicer if the render did have a bit more depth to it

wow every feedback you sound like a pro can you show me some of your work your probably another graphics wiz like puff, me0w, shiny, piersd and bob hehe and i like how you give your honest opinion

[Piersd]

Looks kinda've like a vector sig but way too bright on his left arm.

I just realised something... thats his right arm

[CarlosJ]

wow every feedback you sound like a pro can you show me some of your work your probably another graphics wiz like puff, me0w, shiny, piersd and bob hehe and i like how you give your honest opinion

lol thank you i appreciate it. but tbh no im not a pro with graphics, not even in a similar league to those that you listed. so now your probably confused so il just try clear it up for you; about a year ago i "found" graphics and really wanted to get into it, i made a sig, but i get frustrated how it doesnt appear how i want it to appear. and basically through laziness i havent tried to get better or practice (thats bad advice though)
occasionaly over the yearish i have made a few sigs, when people like this have seen my posts and ask if i can do something expecting it to be good (how schocked they were) so the forum i "tried" graphics on i learn alot from; looking at others sigs, tutorials, packs, design styles, how they reply(at times) and gradually began to understand about graphics a bit. but recently they have shut down so i found this section here and thought why not look over and see what its like. so i don't tbh know how my sigs will turn out as ive only done one recently, (last month), one perhaps two months ago and the others are all within first 6monthsish of trying graphics; so old

but seriously i dont claim to be a graphics wiz, but when it comes to rating and helping people i like to help where i can, maybe it was from my own experience when i made my first sig the replies i got were, "nice keep trying", "not bad". which to me didnt tell me how to improve at all so i tryed to do that for others.
so if you do want to look at all my work (i think theres 4 or 5 sigs ive ever done) then pm me or post. (just realised bit overdone the smilies)
p.s. sorry piersd for hijacking your thread, but regarding your new version think looks a bit easier too see but still would be nice to get a faint light source just to give a bit of contrast against the render

[Piersd]

meh idc if your "hijacking" my thread...

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Not a big difference, is it too bright?